Topic： It's the only way to improve the satety on our roads that give much strict punishment to driving offence.Are you agree that?

題目問的是：你贊同還是反對——提高道路安全的唯一途徑是嚴懲駕駛違規(guī)行為。如果你贊同，你就必須證明嚴懲駕駛違規(guī)行為是唯一途徑;如果你反對，則要證明嚴懲駕駛違規(guī)行為不是唯一途徑。注意審題，不然很容易偏題。我的立場是贊同。

IDEAS：

1.正是因為處罰輕，使得違規(guī)駕駛的肇事司機喪無視他人生命及安全，只有嚴懲，才能防止違規(guī)駕駛，確保道路安全。論據(jù)：2004年中國大中城市交通事故報告顯示：事故原因有80%由違規(guī)駕駛所致。大多數(shù)司機的安全意識很淡薄。

2.近年來政府加大交通安全的宣傳力度，但收效甚微，違規(guī)駕駛現(xiàn)象高居不下，只有嚴懲才能起到殺雞殺儆候之效

3.以新加坡為例，法律嚴明，交通事故率極低。

The issue of how to improve the safety on roads has always been the focus of much attention.people come up with various solutions,but some emphasize that the only feasible way is to give strict punishment to driving offence.Personally,I share these people's point of view.

It is much lesser punishment that makes those hit-and-run drivers devoid of the reverence for other people's life and close attention to road safety.---topic sentence An authoritative traffic analysis reporting indicates that approximately 80% of traffic accidents result from driving offence which occured in large and medium cities in China during the second half of 2004, and the rest of traffic accidents are due to bad weather and poor quality of automobile. These statistics show that most automobile drivers lack the consciousness of safe driving.They deserve severe legal punishment.Only after stricter punishment is carried out can driving offence decrease.

In recent years,the Chinese government intensify efforts to publicize safe driving and traffic rules by the mass media.But that has very little effect on reducing driving offence.Therefore,it's time to beat the dog before the lion! Only strict punishment can play a role of a serious warning to those reckless drivers.

Take an Asian country Singapore for instance.Singapore is well-known for its extremely stric trffic law worldwide.Those who break the traffic rules must be severely punished.Without the supervision of traffic police，an extraordinarily low rate of traffic accidents has been kept for years,which totally attributes to local people's following the traffic rules.

Undoubtedly,improving the unsafe traffic situation is the most vital thing these days.I firmly hold the view that giving strict punishment to driving offence is the unique practicable solution.

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