最有效的高考作文寫作方法
一:開頭
句子的開頭方式,不要一味地都是主語開頭,接著是謂語、賓語,最后再加一個狀語??梢园褷钫Z置于句首,或用分詞做狀語等。
〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.
〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
〔修正〕Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.
二:經(jīng)過
2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一兩個句式,要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調(diào)句、主從復合句、分詞狀語等。
①強調(diào)句
〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.
〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in the street.
②由with或without引導的短語。如:
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
③分詞短語。如:
Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment.
④倒裝句。如:
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.
Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.
⑤省略句。如:
If so,victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherever necessary.
3.通過分句和合句,增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。
〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.
Some told stories. Some played chess.
〔修正〕After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同長度的句子,要結(jié)合使用,不能只用短句或只用長句。
4.學會使用過渡詞。如:
①遞進: then(然后), besides(還有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。
②轉(zhuǎn)折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反), after all(畢竟)等。
③總結(jié): finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(總之), in conclusion(最后)等。
④強調(diào): indeed(確實), certainly(一定), surely(確定), above all(尤其)等。
⑤對比: in the same way(同樣地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
相似的比較: similarly, in the same manner 相反的比較: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
5.注意使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞,以增加文采。如:
〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
6.避免重復使用某一單詞或短語。如:
〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
三、 結(jié)尾
1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如說到和諧社會 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)
2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我們必須采取一些有效的措施來做些什么)
4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
一些用法:
1、 陳述個人的觀點
It is alleged that(據(jù)說)
In my view, both sides are partly right(兩方面都部分的正確)
As far as I am concerned(就我而言)
As regards to me
My own point of view is that……
Personally, I believe that……
My experience tells me that……
The invention of the handset, I dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit.
The application of web sites, I dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit.
It comes as no surprise that Chinese economy becomes increasingly hot.
2、 陳述別人的觀點
Other individuals, however, take the attitude that……
(錯誤的觀點)sb is under the false belief that……
3、 圖表作文
The table shows\indicates\ reveals that ……(表明、暗示、揭示)
According to the statistics showing in that graph, we can easliy see\found……(根據(jù)表中的數(shù)據(jù),我們可以看見,發(fā)現(xiàn))
As seen from the chart/ As is portrayed in the picture
Sales went into a slight decline=sales declined slightly(小幅下降)
Sales declined dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)
A brief glimpse at our campus (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mobile phone, becoming more and more prevalent.
最有效的高考作文寫作方法
一:開頭
句子的開頭方式,不要一味地都是主語開頭,接著是謂語、賓語,最后再加一個狀語。可以把狀語置于句首,或用分詞做狀語等。
〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.
〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
〔修正〕Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.
二:經(jīng)過
2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一兩個句式,要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調(diào)句、主從復合句、分詞狀語等。
①強調(diào)句
〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.
〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in the street.
②由with或without引導的短語。如:
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
③分詞短語。如:
Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment.
④倒裝句。如:
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.
Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.
⑤省略句。如:
If so,victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherever necessary.
3.通過分句和合句,增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。
〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.
Some told stories. Some played chess.
〔修正〕After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同長度的句子,要結(jié)合使用,不能只用短句或只用長句。
4.學會使用過渡詞。如:
①遞進: then(然后), besides(還有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。
②轉(zhuǎn)折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反), after all(畢竟)等。
③總結(jié): finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(總之), in conclusion(最后)等。
④強調(diào): indeed(確實), certainly(一定), surely(確定), above all(尤其)等。
⑤對比: in the same way(同樣地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
相似的比較: similarly, in the same manner 相反的比較: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
5.注意使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞,以增加文采。如:
〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
6.避免重復使用某一單詞或短語。如:
〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
三、 結(jié)尾
1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如說到和諧社會 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)
2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我們必須采取一些有效的措施來做些什么)
4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
一些用法:
1、 陳述個人的觀點
It is alleged that(據(jù)說)
In my view, both sides are partly right(兩方面都部分的正確)
As far as I am concerned(就我而言)
As regards to me
My own point of view is that……
Personally, I believe that……
My experience tells me that……
The invention of the handset, I dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit.
The application of web sites, I dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit.
It comes as no surprise that Chinese economy becomes increasingly hot.
2、 陳述別人的觀點
Other individuals, however, take the attitude that……
(錯誤的觀點)sb is under the false belief that……
3、 圖表作文
The table shows\indicates\ reveals that ……(表明、暗示、揭示)
According to the statistics showing in that graph, we can easliy see\found……(根據(jù)表中的數(shù)據(jù),我們可以看見,發(fā)現(xiàn))
As seen from the chart/ As is portrayed in the picture
Sales went into a slight decline=sales declined slightly(小幅下降)
Sales declined dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)
A brief glimpse at our campus (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mobile phone, becoming more and more prevalent.