高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)正反對(duì)比議論文寫作技法指導(dǎo):
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并列關(guān)系:and, as well as, also…
遞進(jìn)關(guān)系:besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more…
比較、對(duì)比:like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand…
表示時(shí)間關(guān)系:first, second, then, finally/at last/in the end , soon immediately, suddenly, at the same time, meanwhile, recently
表示對(duì)稱順序關(guān)系:for one thing….. for the other thing, on one hand,…..on the other hand,above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, next, finally,the former….the latter,
表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系:what is more, as well, moreover, besides ,furthermore, in addition,what’s worse
表示換一種方式表達(dá):in other words ,that is to say
表示舉例說明:for example, like, such as, for instance
表示陳述事實(shí):in fact ,actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth
表示總結(jié):on the whole, in a word, to sum up, in short, in conclusion, from what I have said above
表示因果關(guān)系:as a result ,thus, therefore, so that, as, because, consequently,
表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but, however, while, instead, although, different from, not only ..but also
表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn):in my opinion, personally, as far as I know, I believe, I think, as we all know ,It is known to us all that….
寫作模版一We had a heated discussion about /on__, students’ views/ideas/opinions on it vary /differ from person to person. Some students believe that…… however ,others hold the view that_____ As far as I’m concerned, I believe___ In conclusion/ in a word
寫作模版二should……? Opinions are divided on the question some of us think that …. The reason is that ….. However, others are against it. They think….
In my opinion, for one reason, for another reason, in a word. Only through….. Can we have a bright future.
范例1
你是七中高三年級(jí)的一名學(xué)生,今年即將高中畢業(yè)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給的要點(diǎn)提示,就關(guān)于“高考志愿選擇”用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,描述學(xué)生中存在的兩種想法。
觀點(diǎn)
理由
1
首先選擇專業(yè)
1.個(gè)人興趣
2.社會(huì)需求
2
首先選擇大學(xué)
1.眾多課程選擇
2.求職更受青睞
3
你的看法并說明原因
[要求]
請(qǐng)用狀語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、不定式、部分倒裝、虛擬語(yǔ)氣完成作文。
參考范文:
A good major or a good university
Every student will be faced with the choice when he passes the College Entrance Examination. Should he choose a good major or a good university first? Different students will offer different answers.
Some students think the choice should be based on their own interests. Because only in this way can they take their favorite jobs in the future. Or they should select major according to the need of society. Other students believe that a good university provides a wide range of courses which may be of great importance to their development and that if they were not graduating from leading universities, they wouldn’t be likely to find a good job.
Personally, the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we can’t obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.
范例2
最近,你校組織高三學(xué)生開展了一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是:周末雙休日要不要上課。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息,寫一篇短文,客觀地介紹一下討論的情況。
30%
30%
40%
1.要上課
2.高考6月舉行,要抓緊時(shí)間復(fù)習(xí)
1.不要上課
2.休息好,提高學(xué)習(xí)效率
1.其中一天學(xué)習(xí),一天休息
2.學(xué)習(xí)與休息兩頭兼顧
注意:1.文章的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.120 詞左右。
Recently, the students of Senior 3 in our school have had a discussion about whether we should have classes on weekends.
1.審題
做到三定:①定體裁:議論文;②定人稱:以第三人稱為主;
③定時(shí)態(tài):主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
2.謀篇
本文首先要介紹討論的主題:周末雙休日要不要上課。然后按照表中所說的三類學(xué)生進(jìn)行逐一介紹。要按照文章要求客觀地介紹討論的情況,沒有必要表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。
[滿分范文]
Recently, the students of Senior 3 in our school have had a discussion about whether we should have classes on weekends.
①30% of them think they should have classes on weekends, because the college entrance examination this year will be held in June, and students should make full use of free time to review what they have learned. ②They think that only by studying harder can they be admitted to a leading university.
③Another 30% are against the idea of having classes on weekends. ④They believe students should have a good rest on weekends so that they can study more effectively during the weekdays.
⑤The other 40% of the students don’t approve of either of the ideas above. ⑥In their opinion, study and rest are both of great importance for students. ⑦They suggest one day of the weekend should be used to study while during the other day they have a rest.
[滿分緣由]
1.結(jié)構(gòu)布局本文可分為四段:第一段介紹討論的主題;
第二段介紹有30%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為要上課,并說明理由;
第三段介紹另有30%的學(xué)生觀點(diǎn)是不要上課及其理由;
第四段介紹其余的40%采取了折中的想法,并說明理由。
2.亮點(diǎn)詞匯make full use of,be admitted to, effectively, approve of, of great importance
3.亮點(diǎn)句式第①句包含because引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句,被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)以及what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句;第②句包含部分倒裝和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài);第④句包含so that引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句;
第⑦句中suggest后面的賓語(yǔ)從句使用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣。
[句式改寫]
1.用不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)改寫句④
They_believe_students_should_have_a_good_rest_on_weekends_(so_as/in_order)_to_study_more_effectively_during_the_weekdays.
2.用表語(yǔ)從句改寫句⑦
Their_suggestion_is_that_one_day_of_the_weekend_should_be_used_to_study_while_during_the_other_day_they_have_a_rest.
實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練:
假如昨天你們班級(jí)以No smoking in public places? 為題開了一次討論會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下情況寫一篇100字左右的文章介紹討論會(huì)的情況。
結(jié)果
15%認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該在公共場(chǎng)合禁煙
85%認(rèn)為應(yīng)該在公共場(chǎng)合禁煙
理由
1、吸煙是個(gè)人自由。
2、吸煙能提高工作效率。
3、長(zhǎng)期的習(xí)慣無(wú)法立刻改變。
1、吸煙有害健康。
2、吸煙浪費(fèi)金錢。
3、吸煙對(duì)環(huán)境和他人也造成了傷害。
Yesterday we had a discussion about whether or not we should stop smoking in public places.
高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)議論文主要以正反對(duì)比議論文為例
How to write an argumentation?參考答案
實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練:假如昨天你們班級(jí)以No smoking in public places? 為題開了一次討論會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下情況寫一篇100字左右的文章介紹討論會(huì)的情況。
結(jié)果
15%認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該在公共場(chǎng)合禁煙
85%認(rèn)為應(yīng)該在公共場(chǎng)合禁煙
理由
1、吸煙是個(gè)人自由。
2、吸煙能提高工作效率。
3、長(zhǎng)期的習(xí)慣無(wú)法立刻改變。
1、吸煙有害健康。
2、吸煙浪費(fèi)金錢。
3、吸煙對(duì)環(huán)境和他人也造成了傷害。
Yesterday we had a discussion about whether or not we should stop smoking in public places.
Eighty-five percent of us think it is necessary to stop smoking in public places.Most of us think smoking does harm to people’s health and the environment. Besides, people should not spend so much money on the cigarettes.
Meanwhile, about fifteen percent of us didn’t agree.In their opinion, people should have their own right to do the things they like, such as smoking. It is very hard to give up smoking for those people who have smoked for many years. And they think smoking is useful for people to improve their work.